I think this series keeps getting stronger, but I have a couple of nits to pick. The first is that Jayne can get anything she wants, at anytime, because she is richer than some nations, and has a lawyer on retainer who can get it for her - car, clothes, condo, shoes, you name it, she can have it pronto. I can suspend my disbelief about this, because the storytelling is so good, but it doesn't sit well with me. However, I had a huge problem at the end. When all the people with riders show up at the end, for the massive showdown, it was way too convenient to have Jayne, her rider and Father Chapin all work together and just pop the riders out of the mass of people attacking. It was too easy a way for them to get out of that mess.